16-year old goes to pick up his siblings; ends up getting shot at the wrong address

Tapxe said
Read fine to me.

I think it plays to what should be a natural reaction that knocking on the wrong door is no reason to shoot someone. To be wrong in that reaction means that there was a whacko at the door with a gun and bad intent.
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It centers the story as if the kids actions caused what happened- the cause of the shooting is the shooter