Observation about the newly acquired guys....

Vilma, Gay, and McCray are all guys that have been in the league only 3-4 years, but enough experience to know the game. They are all in their prime and a lot of football left to play in each one.

To move this from mere factual observation to a real claim, you need to further point out that this is a different approach than the one we took last year, when we acquired guys like Simmons and Patten at the end of their careers. Also, you left out another obvious but key fact: Vilma, Gay, and McCray are all on DEFENSE. Thank goodness we're finally going right to the root of the problem with our team.